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Bird904
07-14-2008, 01:02 AM
Not really a battle....but.....i need feedback

***AUDIO HERE***

http://www.zshare.net/audio/15265258073d5380/

I'm the flyest in the game so I'm igniting a change
they call me highly insane but I'm bright in the brain
the game is too plain so I'm bringing the spice
rhymes are nice on the mic I reach lyrical heights
I got talent and you can ask Simon Cowel
Can't digest my intellect gets stuck in your bowels
towels can't absorb my spit so just quit
nothing can calm me down when i get into it
I'm renown around town as the best around
these clowns cant compete so they best back down
own the crown get the glory
want money? get Gorey
Coming at me ill show them their daddy like Maury
lyrically see the fact is
dudes softer than a mattress
flip a phrase around now who is the baddest
lyrically skilled I'm perpetually ill
gave em a plate of revenge and their having their fill
regardless of what they think I'm not out to get paid
This rap game is trash gotta bring back the ways
of the old lo and behold untold lyrics unfold
when I'm in the booth spitting out my soul
up till four in the morning writing out tracks
preaching a message to the people through the magic of wax
in fact like macs i blast hats off to the real emcees
and applause for the haters who mad at me

Bird904
07-14-2008, 01:46 AM
dog wtf haha...that had nothin to do with you

YoungDeeZy
07-14-2008, 01:47 AM
You see me on the block,better call the cops!
Or better yet,call ya lil homies,or get at gun! Ya niggaz
better duck cause the bullets flyin Str8 from my gun! .40 cal
put his feet on his back,how this nigga actin like he wants beef
on his lil freestyle track? Tell him to sleep on his back because im
the ma fucka Grim reaper of rap, you can box like your cashis Klay,
but my niggaz going to smash & spray! So if you aint got that money
or that cash to pay,then im going to get Michale Jackson to
run up in ya ass today! Your time is up,you think im playin go ahead and line
em up! Im make ya whole block turn into V.T.,It aint about who can rap,you a
bitch lil homie I knocked you out with a slap! It was cool when shit wasnt
changin,now these stupid fuckin faggots dissed me without sayin my name!
how you going to talk about guns like I aint got one? Talk about that cash
but you aint got NONE! Wanna knuckle up bitch them in hurtin you,NA you dont
wanna fuck wit me,you like 5'6 and 120,Nigga I will break ya fuckin back in
half,so if you run up wit ya knuckles imma have to laugh,Imma realy hate to
see the aftermath! Just to let you bitches know I dont need heat,I'll have you
churpin to the cops like a bird,TWEAT,TWEAT! Fuck ya life you a fuckin faggot,
Keep my fuckin name out your mouth before I fuckin smack it! I been on that murda
shit and still about dat,hit that nigga across the head with the chrome steal,then
beat ya fuckin knot till ya scalp peal!!!!

Whut????????????? Nothing rhymes!

Bird904
07-14-2008, 01:47 AM
some of it does...but idk wtf hes talking about...i wasnt taking shots at him lol


o ok...i c he edited that said just havin fun....i was askin for some feedback though man...lol

YoungDeeZy
07-14-2008, 01:53 AM
some of it does...but idk wtf hes talking about...i wasnt taking shots at him lol


o ok...i c he edited that said just havin fun....i was askin for some feedback though man...lol

Okay some do but he aint put it in tha write place. He aint never gone rapper writing like that.

Ryhmes usually come after every sentence, see he put it in tha middle.

Bird904
07-14-2008, 01:55 AM
ok well whatd you think of mine?

YoungDeeZy
07-14-2008, 02:01 AM
ok well whatd you think of mine?

Yours was staright RAW.

Bird904
07-14-2008, 02:01 AM
lmao thanks haha.....
i just got done recording it...uploadin to zshare now

YoungDeeZy
07-14-2008, 02:03 AM
lmao thanks haha.....
i just got done recording it...uploadin to zshare now

iGotta listen to dat. Is it a full song or just that verse?

Bird904
07-14-2008, 02:08 AM
just that verse...

http://www.zshare.net/audio/15265258073d5380/

YoungDeeZy
07-14-2008, 02:12 AM
just that verse...

http://www.zshare.net/audio/15265258073d5380/

Dats live. Whut kind of mic do you use?

Bird904
07-14-2008, 02:13 AM
Samson R11, with an old cassette deck....normally it sounds hell of a lot better, but one of my wires is busted.

YoungDeeZy
07-14-2008, 02:20 AM
Samson R11, with an old cassette deck....normally it sounds hell of a lot better, but one of my wires is busted.

Yea that happen to one of my homies but he tried to fix it and just messed everything up.

Bird904
07-14-2008, 02:21 AM
well theres nothing to really fix its, like....you know the big headphone jacks?
well the big male jack goes into the female jack on the casette deck, and the other male plugs into mic outlet on my pc. only problem is those things are cheap as hell, and i go through about 5-6 a year....

YoungDeeZy
07-14-2008, 02:24 AM
well theres nothing to really fix its, like....you know the big headphone jacks?
well the big male jack goes into the female jack on the casette deck, and the other male plugs into mic outlet on my pc. only problem is those things are cheap as hell, and i go through about 5-6 a year....

Yea but he didn't know he had just got it from his brother like a day before it "broke".

Bird904
07-14-2008, 02:30 AM
lmao...i feel you....I sold my PS2 to this kid, and he lived like down the block. so he walked over and got it. this bitch comes back about an hour later talking about its not working, even thuogh i showed him it worked like 5min before he took it home. i was about to fight the dude, but my dad was like let it go. so had to give back the money and keep the PS2.

YoungDeeZy
07-14-2008, 02:32 AM
lmao...i feel you....I sold my PS2 to this kid, and he lived like down the block. so he walked over and got it. this bitch comes back about an hour later talking about its not working, even thuogh i showed him it worked like 5min before he took it home. i was about to fight the dude, but my dad was like let it go. so had to give back the money and keep the PS2.

lol.......................

YoungDeeZy
07-14-2008, 02:47 AM
Shit what kind of world do we live in where the white boy cant get no love LMFAO!!! Shit its whatever,Im not a rappre nor acted like I was im just fuckin around but you get your pussy lips twisted sideways I see lol. Not "BIRD" the other dude,because this shit was for fun and shouldn't be takin serious. Maybe I shouldnt have posted it up but no one else even fuckin post freestyles up from what I seen fa real lol. So I was just havin fun....stop fuckin crying on some real shit,its a forum lmfao,im not trying to get a goddamn recording Contract LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nigga looks like you takin it serious. lol u funny nigga :rofl:

Bird904
07-14-2008, 02:50 AM
im white :)....well...half white half puerto rican

YoungDeeZy
07-14-2008, 02:57 AM
Ya homie I know I was just fuckin around.

I cant rap....so I Keyboard Freestyle,guess I
can't do that niether lmfao. But ya its all good,
I just thought it was funny dude crying like a bitch
on the net and his fake ass "Young Jeezy" name lmfao

"YOUNG DEEZY" Shit,thats fuckin gay to take someone's EXACT name.
just replacin the "J" with a "D" hahah. Go bounces on your daddys dick
with a snow cone faggot!

Once again you takin it serious. And no im not gay. I know im not gay so that little comment doesn't offend me. Young Weezy, Young Jeezy, Kanyeezy, Young DeeZy. So just stop dyckrydin BWS and go home

Oh yea how am i cryin, cause i spoke tha truth and said you cant rap?

Im done with ya little E-Beef wit me. Im 13 years old and still act more grown up den u.

Bird904
07-14-2008, 03:04 AM
smh at how threads turn completely off topic these days...

YoungDeeZy
07-14-2008, 03:10 AM
Haha.13? Wow aint you still in your strollers,and drinkin out of sippey cups? Cant believe you even know how to work a computer you lil bastard lmfao. This DEFFENETLY aint worth my time arguin with a todler lmfao. But one thing,thats NOT there rap names. lmfao.....GO home,suck on mommy's tittie and dont worry imma be over there makin her bed sqeek real soon so run along lil one LMFAO!:eek:

"Im 13 years old and still act more grown up den u." U make yourself seem so childish just grow up.

"Wow aint you still in your strollers,and drinkin out of sippey cups?"
Do you know how dumb that made you look?

Anyway Bird u gone release another freestyle?

YoungDeeZy
07-14-2008, 03:11 AM
Na homie I thought the lyrics where dope homie I was just fuckin around and tryin to start a freestyle battle for fuckin around but then lil kids start cryin because mommy didnt change there diper today. But ya its dope bruh. Got the beat/audio lol aka Song finished?

Damn nigga how am i cryin?

Bird904
07-14-2008, 03:15 AM
"
Anyway Bird u gone release another freestyle?

Got the beat/audio lol aka Song finished?

I mean that wasn't a freestyle, im not that good but Ill be putting more songs up. Also the songs on the first page. Zshare link Add me on my myspace if u want i got some more junk on there

http://www.myspace.com/bird904

YoungDeeZy
07-14-2008, 03:18 AM
I mean that wasn't a freestyle, im not that good but Ill be putting more songs up. Also the songs on the first page. Zshare link Add me on my myspace if u want i got some more junk on there

http://www.myspace.com/bird904

Bout to add you on MySpace

Bird904
07-14-2008, 03:20 AM
ight acceppted

ZEALOUS
07-14-2008, 11:46 PM
all yall suck.....

Bird904
07-15-2008, 12:03 AM
well thanks for the feedback anyway zealous

ZEALOUS
07-15-2008, 12:19 AM
i was just kidding. You know me. lol
I wanna see some real battles though, wats the point of having the section if noone do it lol

Bird904
07-15-2008, 12:23 AM
Oh I was like ok, well everyone has their opinions....haha.
I don't get pissed when somebody says that though cause its real pointless
Same...I'll battle people. I'm not a great freestyler but I'll battle lol

ZEALOUS
07-15-2008, 12:24 AM
lol. same here, Actually i freestyled in the one of the posts, me and Rawn Oneal, Go check it out
Rhawn Oneals thread

Bird904
07-15-2008, 12:26 AM
ight ill look it up...imma add you on myspace 2

ZEALOUS
07-15-2008, 12:44 AM
coo coo. I saw that he was writtign some poetry and ish, so i wrote some shytm, Then he thought i was battling him and shyt, so he responded, Then IM like wtf No this nigga didnt, So then i went back and gave him some shyt, it was fun, I think only me and him read the shyt noone comes down to these sections lol

Bird904
07-15-2008, 12:55 AM
i looked for it i couldnt find it lol

ZEALOUS
07-15-2008, 01:01 AM
Lmao Look in the Off topic joint, And Read Rhawn Oneals THread about nothing

Bird904
07-15-2008, 01:16 AM
oh allright i see it now...nice

We fighting these demons together Rawn, if we go away the whole site get a famine

ZEALOUS
07-15-2008, 01:35 AM
yea thats me :)