Shoe adversitement

[BlastDesign]

this was for my battle

but they dicide it not to put the entrance...

[UniqueGraffix]

Come bring $25 bucks for this shoes?
i think its supposed to read.
come bring $25 buck for these shoes

[BlastDesign]

Originally Posted by UniqueGraffix

Come bring $25 bucks for this shoes?
i think its supposed to read.
come bring $25 buck for these shoes

thnak you but talk about the design not about how i write thank you verry much..

[StrattaG]

designs koo, text needs work and u need english classes

[LadyVishus]

this is bad for a shoe ad........ppl would like to see the product at least....text is no good to me........don't even think u need the bills in there

[Dennny]

Yeah text is pretty much the main thing on here and there's so much open space on the piece for you to make it bigger.

[BlastDesign]

i just did a litle fast tought...

but thnx for all ya' comments..

[Livia329]

I think you need to differ from hip hop style of design to a corporate style. Corporate doesn't mean slick and boring these days, but a shoe ad will be for a company and when ever I see a shoe/clothing advert that looks (or tries to) like a mixtape styled ad it's the sites that sell knock off prada's, Air Forces etc.

You just don't put bills on an advert... looks like you want to thieve there money. Like vishus said, you don't even see the product. 'buy it now'... how about no. The text isn't good. The execution in general isn't good and do you release just HOW many revisions you'll have to do with your bad grammar for a client(trust me... it's bad, no offense)?!

[BlastDesign]

Originally Posted by Livia329

I think you need to differ from hip hop style of design to a corporate style. Corporate doesn't mean slick and boring these days, but a shoe ad will be for a company and when ever I see a shoe/clothing advert that looks (or tries to) like a mixtape styled ad it's the sites that sell knock off prada's, Air Forces etc.

You just don't put bills on an advert... looks like you want to thieve there money. Like vishus said, you don't even see the product. 'buy it now'... how about no. The text isn't good. The execution in general isn't good and do you release just HOW many revisions you'll have to do with your bad grammar for a client(trust me... it's bad, no offense)?!

a ma try to..