Perfume add for Marketing

[ezGFX]

Tell me what to keep and what to change. I really need a good grade on this product.

[wowa]

Isn't that perfume nuvo?

[Kristian]

the text is really bad and the people seem irrelevant and out of place

[prthugp]

i dont understand the flow of what you got going on. dont make sense to me.

[ezGFX]

Originally Posted by wowa

Isn't that perfume nuvo?

yes... i couldnt find a bottle that fit the pic except that one.

[ezGFX]

Monica is every girl in the pic. And there for i called it alter-ego. I have to create a Perfume endorsement.

[Spaid_Designs]

Would be better with a sexy classic font.

[UniqueGraffix]

nuvo has a perfume now... thats wuts up.. lol

[Southerngirl]

So you took Derek Blanks alter ego shoot for the main art and a Nuevo bottle for your perfume? What did you do to this because the only thing I see you added is text? I think you could get a little more creative with the name because that Alter Ego and the photographic style are both copyrighted by Blanks

[ezGFX]

yea, i did and i had planned on giving him Photo Credit. i came up with the Name alter ego and when i type it in his pics came up so i thought they would be great to use in the add. As far as the nuvo bottle, there wasnt any other bottle i could think of that went with the overall Add. Honestly this isnt suppose to be my best work. I just wanted know if it was good enough for a
high school marketing Project due on monday. So thanks everyone For your comments and I will continue to work with this.